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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sometimes sometimes it hurts to be friendly with my memories sitting in clothing that is mine next to tender skin scratching me like a past prickly petticoat that I really didn’t want to wear “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well described, the past as a petticoat. Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! how cool is this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Always a surprise, always a rise. Enjoyed |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Helen that "past prickly petticoat" is scratching me this is great work! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Your words draw me in every time....every single time. If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I think I have that same prickly petticoat!! very nice words here!  RDB |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some times too many...  M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
At least you can take off a petticoat, huh? Well done, indeed! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Expressively prickly and to the point felt that CG |
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