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Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2007-01-13 03:13 AM

Looking at the tree standing in the sun
Flowers on each litle string
In colours that looks so bright
it gives one the warm feeling of pleasure joy and fun
The feeling of give and bring
Its shining with a white light

Looking at the tree standing in the rain
Drops are falling and hanging on every string
Still its standing in colors of green so bright
It gives life and it seems so strong within no pain
If with bells it would have said tingelingeling
It feels though the drops are heavy so right

Looking at the tree in the wind
The wind is lurking with every string
Without flowers it doesnt look so bright
It gives the feeling or maybe a hint
Trying to overlive with everything that anyone would bring
It covers in one with the night

But the tree as our life
It will raise again with flowers on every string
It will once again look gorgeous in the sunshine bright

To live is to be beyond
To raise means to feel to live
I will follow the tree in my path to come
And Nothing will be un done !

Smiles

Jes

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-13 03:23 AM

oh Jes... your words are beautiful - I love trees they are strong, they give shelter, they serve us well ... thank you for sharing this with us

I hope you visit us regulary here in the blue pages...

RDB

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-01-13 10:25 AM

"But the tree as our life
It will raise again with flowers on every string
It will once again look gorgeous in the sunshine bright

To live is to be beyond
To raise means to feel to live
I will follow the tree in my path to come
And Nothing will be un done !"

That's the spirit!
Excellent write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-13 11:17 AM

Jes, what a beautiful view this is!

lovely poem!

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

4 posted 2007-01-13 12:48 PM

Thanks for all ya comments you all know mee somehow though i havent been here for some time.

I just had the feeling of this i was sitting and looking out on a tree in our garten.

Sometimes nature just tells us so much like in our own reality.

Thanks for ya comments smile and best wishes

Jes / Dreamer

amberhues
Member

since 2006-11-01

Posts 93

5 posted 2007-01-13 04:31 PM

Very beautiful.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

6 posted 2007-01-13 11:14 PM

Hi Amberhues

Thanks for ya comment.

Smile and best wishes

Jes / Dreamer

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