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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-13 12:42 PM



Ocean comets, cherry blossoms
Streaming purple light,
Garden webs and chocolate gems
Glowing in the night.

Winter wine, ribbons wide
Flowing fire bright,
Magic moons, desert dunes
Glowing in the night.

Crystal globes and castle moats
Rippling blizzard white,
Crickets' songs, rivers long
Glowing in the night.

Dances slow, dreams I find
Meant to last the night,
Visions graced by your face
Glowing in my mind.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



© Copyright 2007 Bill Franklin - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-01-13 12:53 PM


lovely Bill....  RDB  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-01-13 08:03 AM


Not only do your words glow ~ you do as well!

I enjoy your poetry, Dear Poet!

Write on! Glow on!

EA

JL
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3 posted 2007-01-13 10:21 AM


Ditto...Ditto!!
Excellent write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-01-13 11:21 AM


purely artistic!
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