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feet (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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feet under table touching fact I watch your mouth form sounds smiles foot touches my foot trembles me my feet dance in my shoes toes wiggle like spring pups shrimp? you ask holding small pink curl to my mouth mouth takes it from your fingers not for the taste of shrimp for the spice of being love fed good chowder? you ask as if I know as if I know how anything tastes or feels except for your feet under the table touching fact |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Connection, however slight reaches all the way to the sole.... ah... soul. Love the way you write. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sole to soul thank you kindly MoonShadow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh!! I know exactly how this feels!  And you nailed it perfectly! I am SO loving this series.  In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nancy! ain't love grand?  thank you so much |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love notes tap tap tap, to a mingling of rhythum...once again, you leave me smiling... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
LeeJ thank you for the smile! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes, I know how that feels. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautifully you've captured a single moment for all time and shared it with us who can do nothing but stand, mouths agap, and stare at this couple in love. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much scorpio... thank you Ruth I'm glad you have enjoyed this moment [This message has been edited by The Lady (01-13-2007 11:15 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Kate... how anyone could focus on shrimp when his feet are touching yours under the table! LOL loved this, absolutely love it! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it... M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
how indeed Roniece?  thank you thank you M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I declined shrimp last night but I would have accepted feet under table |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Terrific poem, Lady. Beautifully structured and truly vivid. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I am going to have to dig through the archieves and start from the first 1 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
my kinda girl Dixie never pass on feet under the table thank you thank you so much LngJhnAg thank you Bill |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can't help but imagine strawberries covered in chocolat for desert? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you imagine so well Karilea thank you my friend |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Doctor Love |
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