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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2007-01-12 11:48 AM


clinging still to sunlight
ears pressed up against monoliths
frozen electricity
developing hallucinations
quite warm beneath the sun
quite the impression these portals
slightly curved hemispherical
communicating convexity
of opposites
giving motion
promise,
touching, these warm spots
ascendant
…playing by no rules
simply
giving up
a purely human
part of identity
steps leaping
into clouds
drunkenly,
bathed in light
dawn
was rubbing dazed eyes
of moonlight thickening
swept into the move of silence
aching,
burning
looking deeply into the eyes of nature
borne and filled
overflowed with
shimmering tentacles of
corresponding spirals
still, serene
and always
these globes of color
that I dream


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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-01-12 11:51 AM


"looking deeply into the eyes of nature
borne and filled
overflowed with
shimmering tentacles of
corresponding spirals
still, serene
and always
these globes of color
that I dream"

Beautiful dream.
Lovely write Lee J.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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CA
2 posted 2007-01-12 12:06 PM


You always paint such a lovely picture in your poetry.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2007-01-12 03:05 PM


Interesting write, LeeJ, but I find myself wondering - when is a dream not a dream?
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-01-13 03:41 AM


LeeJ... I enjoyed this write of yours RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-01-13 08:24 AM


Good morning, Lovely Lee!

Thank you for sharing your vivid dreams of "globes of color" so beautifully with your avid readers!

May the beauty of your soul be radiated back to you, my dear friend!


Linda

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2007-01-13 11:28 AM


this is beautiful
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2007-01-13 11:34 AM


LeeJ
Very colorful enjoyed the read.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2007-01-13 09:07 PM



"and always
these globes of color
that I dream"

a shimmer of a poem
LeeJ

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2007-01-13 10:06 PM


a purely human
part of identity
steps leaping
into clouds
drunkenly,
bathed in light

~*~

When we don't step into
this state

intentionally...

it is quite the thrill
by mistake.



Loved this part!


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