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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-01-12 08:58 AM



In Intimate Candlelight

With perfume bubbles
All over the skin
If you care to join me
Then come on in

Soft bubbling essence
The feelings bliss
Share the tub for two
Enter with a kiss

As tantalizing bubbles
Soothingly caress
Feeling essential oils
Release the stress

As sensual ripples flow
Slide alongside me
In intimate candlelight
Make love tenderly


HopeĀ©2007
Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL Below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83852682.html

© Copyright 2007 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-01-12 09:00 AM


beautiful write!
HopeS
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2 posted 2007-01-12 09:03 AM


Thanks dixie , its the romantic in me wishful thinking


Hope

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-01-12 05:41 PM


Aha...so this is how you spend your free time...James
HopeS
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4 posted 2007-01-12 10:33 PM


Thanks James , I wish I did

Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-01-13 01:25 AM


ooh Hope!! this was very romantic! RDB
trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2007-01-13 01:28 AM


Damn..I need to get some bath salts etc..Nice write it brought some ideas that i can use in my personal life. Nice poem!
JL
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7 posted 2007-01-13 01:42 AM


Very nice.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

amberhues
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8 posted 2007-01-13 04:29 PM


A very soft and sensual poem. Lovely.
Sunshine
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9 posted 2007-01-13 10:28 PM


Hope, this is lovely.

Well done!




LngJhnAg
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10 posted 2007-01-13 11:30 PM


And if it's Toe you've written for,
Hoping he'll leave his clothes upon your floor,
Remember, the only ring he'll promise you,
Will circle the tub when he's through.

Other than that... you have written a very sensual, visual poem  must... get... image... of... Toe... in... a... bathtub... out... of... my... head...

MoonShadow
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11 posted 2007-01-14 05:38 PM



   "Share to tub for two
       Enter with a kiss"

   Lovely sensual write... exquisite visions.. I'm ready with my entrance fee and willing to pay double.

             MoonShadow
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Enchantress
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12 posted 2007-01-14 05:55 PM


Very lovely Hope!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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