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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-01-12 07:38 AM



Only the night knows
how often I've lain awake
thinking of you

while holding you so closely
within my heart
that I could hear
you softly breathing
in my ear

and feel your heart beating
against my chest.

It is here alone
where I find rest

wrapped
in the warmth

of you.


seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-01-12 08:06 AM


Gentle Spirit
Lovely and that is the gentle spirit.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-01-12 08:42 AM


beautiful
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-01-12 08:45 AM


Your words wrap warmly, Gentle Spirited One.

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2007-01-12 11:14 AM


Lovely and warm Donna.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

trutodaraiders
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CA
5 posted 2007-01-12 11:41 AM


Such a sweet heart. Thank You for sharing this poem
JL
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2007-01-12 11:47 AM


"It is here alone
where I find rest

wrapped
in the warmth

of you."
Very nice.
JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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7 posted 2007-01-12 01:10 PM


beautiful, it was such a strong read from the very first line...enjoyed this beauty...
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
8 posted 2007-01-12 01:23 PM



   Start to finish most captivating... and you wrapped it up so wonderfully. Made my day, thank you for sharing.

             MoonShadow
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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
9 posted 2007-01-12 06:02 PM



"wrapped
in the warmth

of you"

poignant and lovely
gentle Donna

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
10 posted 2007-01-13 01:22 AM


Donna.... beautiful words here.. RDB
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