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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2007-01-12 05:40 AM


I said to myself in the mirror,
      convicted,
of treason against your own humility.
You are scum,
that carries the weight of the world in dirtiness.

One moment of realization,
came a flood of tears.
One moment of reliance,
came a flood of fears.

I said to myself in the mirror,
       resolution,
to learn from these mistakes.
You are forgiven,
that should carry your hopes to grow stronger.

You were a liar,
as your ways have now changed.
Forgive yourself and love thyself,
the world will tumble after.

© Copyright 2007 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-01-12 05:47 AM


wow!! Kellie... strong emotions here! RDB
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2007-01-12 08:30 AM


good to read you again
trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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CA
3 posted 2007-01-13 06:03 PM


Thought that if this poem was in a different format that the poem would be better. Your words where strong and i liked the poem
Larry C
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4 posted 2007-01-13 08:16 PM


Hi sweet Kellie,
Happy new year. I pray all is well. I enjoyed the write and it's good to see you again.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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5 posted 2007-01-13 08:20 PM


Don't be so hard on yourself....we are but  human....and all things bring light.....Take care..JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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