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Open Poetry #40

Tomorrows Rise

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

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0 posted 2007-01-12 12:42 PM

As I watch tomorrow rise
Faintly in the east,
Gossamer clouds shimmer
Orange and pastel pink.
Dim the pale southern stars
As the ebony sea's
Muffled waves mildly break
On the lonesome beach;
Then a saffron sun appears,
Shyly it ascends,
Gilding earth and heaven
As my prayer is sent.
Rising, like the golden star
Gleaming on the bay,
Swept along to the divine
In the rolling waves.
In the dawning's breeze I hear
Whispers in reply,
Carrying your love to me
In the 'morrow's rise.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-12 05:02 AM

Then a saffron sun appears,

oh Bill I wish I could experience a saffron sun arising one day

RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2007-01-12 08:52 AM

ooooooooo, how descriptive!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2007-01-12 11:12 AM

Wonderful imagery in this piece Bill.
Well done!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 682

4 posted 2007-01-13 12:57 PM

How good will you get in 30 years all will know your name.

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2007-01-13 01:07 AM

I dont know..Writing is more of a hobbie then anything. A lot of people on these blue pages are talented..Thanks Tom of the nice comment

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