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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-01-11 09:42 PM


my words betraying me
once again
so many things
I shouldn't have said
walking there where Angels
once feared to tread
I didn't remember;
couldn't comprehend
so the Angel cried;
just before he died
and now I wonder
how hard they really tried
powerful awakenings
a jumpstart of my heart
bringing me back again
to the start
down through the middle
and over the top
all he said was
this has to stop
knowing too much
and knowing too little
awakening somewhere
in between the middle


~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (01-13-2007 08:17 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-01-12 12:56 PM


Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-01-12 09:04 AM


fantastic write Julie!
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
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3 posted 2007-01-12 02:59 PM


Thank you both....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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