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Open Poetry #40

Intensity

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-01-11 07:00 PM

Intensity

With only weeks
until my sweetheart returns
it has become more intense
for my heart to yearn.

I dare not count the days
until my sweetheart
returns to me,
or I shall miss her
with more intensity.

JamesLee
11January
2007

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-11 07:06 PM

James... she will be with you sooner than soon

RDB

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-01-12 05:23 PM

Thank you Roniece...she will be, or their will be a settling...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-01-12 05:37 PM

oh James
just when your poem has turned my heart to mush
your reply to Roniece makes me chuckle

yes a settling!

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