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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-01-11 09:52 AM


You said that you did check
from time to time
to see if my words held
hidden messages
that were left for you to find

although never did I once
say that it was left for you,
but somehow, still
it seemed that you always knew.

So, here I am
leaving this message here, today
with a hope that you will find it
along your way.

Please know that you are thought of
the same now, as you were then
and I continue to wish that someday
I shall feel your smile, again.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2007-01-11 01:45 PM



dang, gentle Donna
I am of the same mind today
some one I miss

this one made me sad
good work

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2007-01-11 01:48 PM


Awwwww....

very nice Donna.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-01-11 01:53 PM


Beautiful Donna!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Martie
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California
4 posted 2007-01-11 04:51 PM


Donna...I understand this.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-01-11 05:20 PM


Donna... how lovely!! I hope that special someone gets to read this - it's beautiful!

RDB

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
6 posted 2007-01-12 12:55 PM


...I know how that goes..Good write aunt donna

"The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care.." ~ The Offspring

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
7 posted 2007-01-12 05:03 AM


Beautiful and touching words, from such a talented beautiful poet.
God it's good to read your words again.


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2007-01-12 08:41 AM


touching write


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