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The Waltz of the Butterfly
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The Waltz of the Butterfly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Repost: The Waltz of the Butterfly I see this butterfly in view Dressed in multi colored hew And I am harmonized in stare By the wonder of its fair The twitter of its wings in stir Sets my eyes and wits aver And subtle music plays my ear Every moment it is near I wait for it to stop its flight For just a moment to alight So I my set it in my heart Before it lifts, too soon depart I would its spirit leave a trance A Sprig of time a jig of dance Upon a spree of breeze to be To light my paths eternity It would it be a nuance rhyme To waltz upon my trance of time |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a morning beauty  Love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you and have a real good day.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Midst a yen for azure blue sky to sing my heart anew, in the cold of starless night winter spread a blanket white. Now butterflies on stained glass wing gift my palm with Sy of spring! Thank you!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, A delightful reply, thank you  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the butterfly counts not months but moments and has time enough… to waltz delightful picture Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady That's true, thank you dear. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely stunning!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You're absolutely beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I would be a butterfly's stripe or a light upon your halo bright  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is absolutely beautiful, Seymour. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy....  are one of my favourite creatures! nicely penned thank you ! RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I wouldn't mind that. SmartChick Thank you so much. RDB, So glad you enjoyed the read, thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I recently saw a wonderful photograph of butterflies... Through your words, I see them again... Beautiful write! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern How are you, I missed you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Sir Sonneteer Thy feathered quill hath dipped into some delightful ink for this fine piece of graceful penning!  Thou be an amazing poet with a wealth of observations, wisdom, beauty, magic, and charm in your illustrious well! Hugs with love, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You have a permanent job as my Angel. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel What would I do without you watching over me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aww, my sweet sonneteering friend, I will always be close by watching over you! |
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