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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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challenge me to ride the wind with you ~ a gentle gentleman day wind hurries business to attend whips a fury ‘round corners blowing hats flying hair watering eyes day wind is energy causing heels that kick hearts that race but the night wind swings a cradle wisped of wishes low embers desire the night wind is the wind that rides easy swelling on moonbeams hovering dream smelling air I challenge you gentle sir to ride the night wind hold me deep in tender arms murmur quietly as I rest my head lightly on your shoulder then let the night wind take us where it will |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I challenge you gentle sir to ride the night wind hold me deep in tender arms murmur quietly as I rest my head lightly on your shoulder then let the night wind take us where it will oooh Lady Kate... this is delightful!! RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece it would be delightful wouldn't it? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a precious thought! |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
wow Lady, that day wind really sucked me in...my hair is a mess!  That night wind though, is something to look forward to!  Bea |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lady Kate.... So lovely....and well written. I will gladly take that challange and show you the ecstacy of the 'night wind'. Come ride with me. /pip/Forum103/HTML/000114.html Moonshadow . [This message has been edited by MoonShadow (01-11-2007 11:17 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Inspirations of wind song... and I'm so glad to see that you inspired another!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady The night wind is the wind of dreams. I blows a magic carpet of seems.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...mmmmm, soft allure, those wayward winds sweet challenge and a lovely write! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Dixie may you ride the night wind Bea I noticed your hair was a little out of sorts  stick with the night wind so much nicer Sir Moonshadow that ride was at once freeing and soul capturing and oh how you waltz thank you Karilea it’s good to have a fellow wind rider thank you for your sweet words KL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...I have always loved the wind and would ride with it quite willingly if I was a leaf and not me. A lovely poem of heart! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sweet Martie be a leaf for just a moment it's so perfectly you! thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
James... thank you! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Wow...beautifully done, Kate. Inspiring, say the least...  intoxicated, night wind gently caresses a fragrant meadow CG |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kate~ In gently worded waft of wind you send the words swirling~ BEAUTIFUL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
What a "touching" night wind - something to pray for in my world! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
CG sweet gently caressing haiku thank you hugs to you too Marge thank you Honeybunch pray it can happen! thank you |
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