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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-01-10 09:32 PM


In thought
In action
In love
In tune.... hmmmm....
I wonder if men will ever understand
that the heart is a sanctuary full of wonders....
If nurtured the right way
It will reach unspeakable tolerance to many things...  
A heart held gently
Yet firmly close to another heart can withstand the test of time....
And nothing and no one can ever break'em apart.
So sad that someitmes humans are consumed with self satisfaction and everything else is irrelevant..    
And though they may notice the true value of who they hold close..  
A test is always given to see how much one can endure...  


12/07/06

Jen

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (01-11-2007 07:32 PM).]

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fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16
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1 posted 2007-01-10 11:48 PM


I really like this one. It holds a ring of truth to it.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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2 posted 2007-01-11 03:37 AM


I like this
RDB

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-01-11 06:15 AM


very wise
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