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Write Me A Moon
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Write Me A Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~Write me a moon of soft syncopated swoon Across the skyline of the night Ebon on display, in moonlight array as stars dance waltz with the Milky Way Enter the clouds of fluffy adorn out where the new dreams of this night are now borne Saturn seduces Jupiter, they court through this night, then just when the morn begins making newlight, they come soft glowed in colors all bright, knowing they’ll be around throughout eternity’s flight Swoon a moon of words so gay then send them phasing on their merry way~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Marge!! When you do these shape poems you outshine lady luna herself. Love you~Me In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a lovely lady with exceptional abilities and I delight in reading your poetry.  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The beauty of this poem makes me want to dance under even a cold full moon....A delight to read...I love your shape poems....**big hugs** |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is fantastic. You have such a wonderful talent. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
B e a u t i f u l !!! Marge.... just lovely words here.... RDB |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I always look forward to your "moon" poems, as they are exceptional! All your work is, but I have a special feeling for the moon! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I too,look foward to your "moon" poems I enjoy them so much... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello Marge... just me again, I so love your moon words! Just came back for another read  RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Fantastic Marge!   Bea |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
I am swimming in the stars as we speak. you really have a way with words. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lovely... you are ever the romantic.. late |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW beautiful Marge hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Saturn seduces Jupiter, they court through this night, then just when the morn begins making newlight, they come soft glowed in colors all bright, knowing they’ll be around throughout eternity’s flight sheesh, this one's got me swooning... what a stunning write Margie... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....you have written me a moon when I could not, more beautifully.  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Awsome..Just awsome |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Very well done, a work of art. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As the shifts change...you challenge your own poetry into de-light-ful ways thank you, m'friend. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
send me to the moon too, would you? FNG |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I just love your moon poetry |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
It makes so many images dance across the milky way!! Bravo!! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi Eladitlv Ulv,the beauty of your words sing in my heart. Each soft tenderness you share is a gift unto itself! blessings
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love poems about the moon--or anything in the sky--and you've written the moon here so beautifully, Marge! Good to read you again. I've missed your words! sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ hoping everything is going well in your "neck of the woods" M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ya make me want to do just that! I don't write with any regularity these days -- there just doesn't seem to be much of anything I want to say anymore, and too few I would want to show my soul......but when I read this, I want to write a moon and send it to you gift-wrapped, with a shiny red bow. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Beautiful Marge. Poetically charming. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Lady, you truly are the Moon Goddess of 'Pip Place'!  Love & Moon Light, EO |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm afraid I'm writing the "new" moon these days... nothing is showing! LOL This is great, my friend! *S* |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Beautifully done. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Good Heavens I am negligent in commenting on the replies that you sent me on this moon song rectifying that just now, thanking you all, HOLY COW reading the replies so kind, totally messes with my mind Full moon is now pending up in this newness of March sky Lens-capturing it in my words of great surprise Knowing that I must attend, to the beauty my little ink-of-think muse does send To all a thank you seems right Good Heavens~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-01-2007 12:57 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... it has been a time of beauty for the moons of the come Spring~ I adore the moon ... can you tell ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I debated long, I debated hard I debated over which honored Bard I at long last should choose for whom my 1000th posting, to use. It could be no one other than Marge herself. For Marge remembers me when I am scarce She looks for me even when my heart doesn’t sing. For all your faithful response For all your steady inspiration For the genius of your creations Thank you, Marge! Here is number 1000…just for you. INclan [This message has been edited by INclan (03-27-2007 08:38 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And YOU, my friend ... are a blessing in my life~  THIS MAKES MY DAY ! Love you loads~ Congrats, sweets ... it is a *gift* to know you~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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