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MindBodySoul
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NJ

0 posted 2007-01-10 01:08 PM



True darkness has set in.  Overwhelming with its impurities.  So lonely is its evil.  Realization of reality can be cruel and cold.... So numb... Confusion has set in, can not think, its too painful.  How disappointing is all this?  My heart aches, ... not even darkness can help.. its not a sanstuary today... Thoughts are scattered.. the answer is simple... the action is not..

It can't be understood by many,  it is so simple in their minds... only those who have truly nurtured, can see that an automatic attachment is inevitable.  So sad....so very sad...... haunting thoughts will linger for a while, eventually they will just be part of a painful yesterday...  so sorry this needs to be done... it is not a choice of the heart, it is a choice of logic..

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-01-10 01:59 PM


yes, the pain of choices sometimes well thoughtout ones, can cut to the core

well done

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2007-01-10 02:18 PM


There are many times in life when we are forced to lean on the side of logic.  It's not easy, I know, so my best to you for the healing of your heart which now seems torn apart. Writing helps.  Welcome to Passions!

Helen

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3 posted 2007-01-10 03:30 PM


MBS~
Welcome to this fantastic circle of poetic sharing~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-01-10 05:20 PM


Welcome to PIP you will love it here!  I enjoyed reading this... very thought provoking piece..   RDB
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2007-01-10 05:36 PM


Welcome to Passions.
I thought of having to put a pet to sleep, when I read your words.  

Very emotive.
TD

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6 posted 2007-01-11 07:35 AM


touching piece
Sunshine
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7 posted 2007-01-11 08:15 AM



Jen, Welcome to Passions.  Please,
check your email for a very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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8 posted 2007-01-11 09:04 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS JEN!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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