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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-01-10 10:46 AM


  
                          i'd like to make a dinner reservation for two

and Mcdonald's is a place i think we could pursue some french fries and burgers

                                               then go to the zoo

but first i'll let your delicious apple turnovers cool down while a  connection ensues

then you can tell me why other guys get to coo your conversation

when you know i'm lying in admiration

at the way your imagination

                                                        dazzles me



                                                                                           love,

                                                                                           howard


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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-01-10 11:05 AM


Classic.  Enjoyed Howard.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-01-10 07:36 PM


Howard... just lovely!!  RDB
Mercury06
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since 2006-12-28
Posts 9
Australia, QLD
3 posted 2007-01-10 10:28 PM


You really do fascinate me, Howard.  Your unique style and the way you incorporate rhyme and emotion together is amazing. I very much enjoy your works.
~Mercury

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-01-11 07:43 AM


cute
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