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It dials into my heart
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It dials into my heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It dials into my heart Tracing sunlight’s fading bright Weaving dreams in nightly flight The rising of a fancies wile Impress upon my face a smile Arcing sparks in simmers start Brushing strokes of abstract art Flowing in a rush of clear Hearing with my middle ear Leaving me a lamb in place Walking in a weave of grace With heart and eye upon the sky I rise from bed and start to fly I see the wonders of it’s glean And fly within a garden green Gathering up each flowers nectar Without the cycle of the spectra I would unlock dementia’s store And peek beyond the censures door |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your words catch my eye like ripples on a cool pond. Very nice Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you sweety.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice!! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Sy and much enjoyed! Did I ever tell you I can fly in my dreams? Well I can..and do. Now don't go calling the fellas in the white coats.  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You are one of the privileged not many can fly. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Tracing sunlight’s fading bright Weaving dreams in nightly flight The rising of a fancies wile Impress upon my face a smile loved the opening paragraph, but this in its wisdom speaks volumns...another incredible write |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed and it sure is great to fly be it in dreams or through a poet's words. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Love what you say and how you say it. Honeybunch I agree, thank you sweety. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
AHHH....a magic weave of visions that dance across the mind eye...A total delight to read....**big hugs** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you and I return the hugs. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... I like, I like! I just worked out how to send you a  hug too - how cool! RDB |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You inspire imagination Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Thank you for the butterfly, I couldn't think of a nicer thing to send. scorpio, And your replies inspire me to use it. Thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I rise from bed and start to fly" perfect Sir Sy! I dream flew for the first time just last week amazing, isn't it? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Yes it is and thank you dear. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I float above stairs in my sleep, my feet not touching them. They don't take me anywhere, usually. When I was 15,someone woke me in the middle of that dream. I'd walked down a flight of stairs with a suitcase in my hands. I had my coat on over my night clothes. I told him I was going home. Home was 200 miles away. A garden of paradise? Since I don't really fly well, maybe I can hitch?  |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
One man's dream is another man's nightmare. I'll take yours, thank you very much! (Look ma...I can fly...I can fly!)  Bea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, Quite an experience thank you. I think you could fly. Beatrice, I know the expression and thank you for the read and reply. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear and a very Happy BIRTHDAY to you. |
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