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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-09 10:48 PM



Never Lost to Thought

There it is
that unsaid again
keeping me awake
as I kick off the covers of time
and thirst for more.

Questioning the night
serenaded by dark thoughts
longing for the belonging
and footsteps to leave behind
memories of another life...

Never lost to thoughts of you.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-01-10 12:04 PM


There it is
that unsaid again
keeping me awake
as I kick off the covers of time
and thirst for more.


oh yes,, Maureen very nicely done !  RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-01-10 03:16 AM


seems I'm awake too

I like this poem

JL
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-01-10 11:31 AM


Short, sweet and to the point.
Excellent write!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

vandana
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4 posted 2007-01-11 12:31 PM


good read
Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
5 posted 2007-01-11 12:36 PM


very nice!

I never sleep, and I'm always "lost in thought", or madness, can't tell anymore.

Jason

aziza
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6 posted 2007-02-18 11:57 PM


So nice, M.

A

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