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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In this least little vessel made of love— I’ll finally rest the day I met you dressed in blue That autumn night beneath your stars— the moment I saw you close those eyes placing a hand in mine The way your hair spread in the wind— over the pillow as we lay together under an amber moon Words we said will go as well All I was when you were near— Cast adrift without recourse into a nameless universe Free at last in time’s indifference— and away from harm by lesser gods . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just lovely John... RDB |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I wish that I could write with such ease. Very nicely done. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Painted a nice scene here John..Enjoyed the read. ~Bill |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a perfect moment |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto... JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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