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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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one night of fantasy, one night of magic and lust, one night to give in to the world and crumble into dust one night to be real and let confusion slide, one night for you and me to just go for the ride and let all the fears die inside one night of stars one moon to shine on our skin bare against the sea little black dress off again what gorgeous tears! one night to love me one night to love you makes years. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
you certainly have dreams . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
one night of stars one moon to shine on our skin bare against the sea little black dress off again ooh Dixie... love this!! the LBD works a treat doesn't it!  RDB |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Dixie very nice write, Setup up a nice scene for lovemaking ohhlala ~Bill Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
one night to be real and let confusion slide, one night for you and me to just go for the ride and let all the fears die inside good writing here, Dixie...  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dixie, hello, this was a fantastic read.... thank you for writing and sharing, have missed reading you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks all just tryin to pull out of this writer's block hole |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Love the last three lines! Great write!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful magical images Dixie Hope |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
One is very lucky if the "one night" makes years! Enjoyed! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
like the way that little black dress comes off... again Dixie good work here |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ah, romantic scene in starry night, the sea, the tempt, the warm moonlight, breathes ardor into songs sung blue, Yes! Lose the dress and find a muse! Smiling here, Dixie! Your muse is alive and well. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice Dixie. Jason |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi Passing As what i see you are still doing great within making poems, though i think they shine a litle more now then for a few years ago. I hope ya doing fine. Smiles and best wishes Jes / Dreamer |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You made me smile. I love this poem. It reminded me of one night - learning to play backgammon - laughing - and bad sex that has always remained a good memory. Thank you - A |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
It all adds up to years, the one night after the next, yeah |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I think your muse wants to borrow your little black dress, so she gave you something in return... and wow, what a way to punch a hole in writer's block! Fantastic, it is!  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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