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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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One night of magic, ten years of perfect tunes, and now our bodies lay old worn in grand ruins, in familiar rooms but oh how good it is, how good it feels, to be so in love with you, to spin the wheels of time and rhyme with you. How beautiful you are to me, you are. And funny how you have no clue. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. good . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... just splendid! RDB |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful to see the smile glow in your words again Dixie.  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
isint all guys clueless?? Nice write Dixie I enjoyed the read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just rambling since I got an itch to write but couldn't really think of anything to say thank you for commenting |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Each new write is better and better!! "Like Butter" Loved this one too. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey dixie , reminded me of the song "Spinning Wheels Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dixie, your a gem, and this was beautiful |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Nice write, Dixie! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
keep rambling Dixie it looks good on you... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Wow, if this is rambling...keep it going Cause some people can ramble and for the life of me I can not figure out what it is they're trying to say; But I like your rambling; You said so much...THANX |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi again Passing The more i read i see bigger and bigger smiles i enjoy your writing, keep it going forever. and also keep those smiles forever, they look good at you. Smile jes |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know I love your poetry - if I had forgotten why while I was away, this reminds me. I love your poetry. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I think this deserves another read... very nice words of which I can relate my sweet friend Dixie ....  hugs to you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I'm glad I got to read this little exercise in warmth. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good to read you~ glad you sound happy~ My spirit will rise |
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