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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-01-09 05:52 PM



Parts of Living


Through birth
we gain our entry
into this world and
those that proceed
us welcome us and
bless our beginning.

Through living, we learn
how to accept and reject,
love and forgive, and how
to hold on and let go.

Through the process of
losing loved ones we learn
not to hold on too tight,
and to give those that pass
on before us the dignity to
grow old, become sick and die.


JamesLee
09January
2007



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The Lady
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1 posted 2007-01-09 07:21 PM



this life is for learning
beautiful James...
and so wise

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-01-09 08:29 PM


James... your writing is truly a gift ... this was beautiful!!  RDB
JL
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3 posted 2007-01-10 11:39 AM


"Through the process of
losing loved ones we learn
not to hold on too tight,
and to give those that pass
on before us the dignity to
grow old, become sick and die."

But we have the hope that their passing
takes them to where we will meet them again, someday and forever.

Nice write James.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

WindWalker
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4 posted 2007-02-13 07:51 PM


I must agree "your writing is truly a gift"
Rod
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Auckland New Zealand
5 posted 2007-02-14 10:00 PM


James ...you and I both have a gift.
I have seen many of your other posts
and they show great wisdom.
Thus I know that the One who has given you this gift is the same who gives to me.
Blessings

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-02-15 09:01 AM


Through the process of
losing loved ones we learn
not to hold on too tight,
and to give those that pass
on before us the dignity to
grow old, become sick and die.


James, I loved the empowering realization of this...to allow, to respect, to give of oneself...

lovely poem

passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-02-15 10:08 AM


this is wisdom


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8 posted 2007-02-15 10:16 AM


JamesMichael~

There are some who are slow to learn all the parts of living ... the heart just wants to hold on~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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