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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-07 07:36 AM

Shaped by the Complete

Those words are complete now
having passed through lips
in defense of the intoxicated...where
reality and fantasy blend.

Shaped to fit the betrayal
and prevail over myth
leaving their depth behind
in time...to defend.

Flamed in silence (by that last touch)
where whispers capture the above
and tears, once uncontrollable,
resign in choice to mend.

Surrendering, if only...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-01-07 09:17 AM

Maureen,
Good morning and enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-01-07 05:12 PM

This captures the ultimate
in when it is over...

and the lady

has sung.

Well done, Maureen!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-01-07 05:14 PM

very much enjoyed this read Maureen... RDB

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2007-01-07 06:04 PM

Very nice Maureen.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-01-07 06:23 PM

You always have to right words to convey the feeling.
Well done Maureen.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2007-01-07 09:27 PM

Acceptance is the easiest of three, forgiveness comes second, and to forget...often lingers long.

Perceptive write M.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2007-01-08 05:15 AM

"and tears, once uncontrollable,
resign in choice to mend."

nice

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2007-01-08 05:46 AM

Yes, it's more about acceptance, but not about the ending of a relationship but of accepting how it is and not having expectations...therefore you can't be disappointed.

thank you
M

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2007-01-08 11:57 AM

I love it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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