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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-06 01:08 PM



A fleeting glance of her... I sight,
Her emerald gaze to me,
A love beyond this earth and might,
A breathless view I see.

With door ajar - our lips to each,
A language spoken - none,
Words exchanged by silent speech,
And journey forth to bliss we come.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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1 posted 2007-01-06 01:11 PM


WOW!!  Wonderful Bill!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-01-06 01:24 PM


incredible

I'm amazed each time I read you

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2007-01-06 01:28 PM


Passing, Enchantress Thank you kindly for your comments..
Margherita
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4 posted 2007-01-06 01:31 PM


Eloquent silence!
Very lovely.

Love,
margherita

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-01-06 04:30 PM


Nice writing...James
SmartChick
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6 posted 2007-01-06 05:31 PM


Beautiful!
The Lady
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7 posted 2007-01-06 08:24 PM




"Words exchanged by silent speech,
And journey forth to bliss we come"

there you go Bill
being exquisitely romantic again

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8 posted 2007-01-06 10:05 PM


I love your poetry. I'm
going to put you in my library right now.
Hugs,
Ethel

Tom Zart
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9 posted 2007-01-06 11:30 PM


You are quite good give us more I know you are full of passion.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2007-01-06 11:35 PM


Bill.... beautiful!   RDB
aziza
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11 posted 2007-02-18 12:57 PM


This is lovely - each time I read it I fell into it a bit more.

A

tracie66
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12 posted 2007-02-27 04:26 AM


Breathtaking ~ beautifully penned, well done.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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