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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2018-10-16 02:25 PM


I know the land where
The lemon trees flower.
My love met me near them
To linger an hour.
I kissed him, I hugged him
And smelled the sweet scent,
And prayed it stayed with him
Wherever he went.
The day was so perfect,
The sky was so blue,
The fragrance entrancing
And love was so new.
He broke off a blossom
And gave it to me,
And promised his love
For an eternity.
My friends are so happy
To plan bridal showers
And my wedding bouquet
Is of lemon tree flowers.

© Copyright 2018 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Clare Ite
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Where The Pallet Pins Play
1 posted 2018-12-28 11:42 PM


The Kingston Trio (among others) truly gave the Lemon tree it's due just as you have, dear Joyce.

I always have time for you...

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2019-01-05 03:54 PM


Enjoyed the rhyme and meter mixed with thoughts of lemon tree flowers ... inspiring
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2019-01-07 03:36 AM


quote:
"The sky was so blue,
The fragrance entrancing
And love was so new"
I got attached to these lines, Joyce, and kept going back to them.

Splendid!

...just bein' Bluesy

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2019-04-17 01:44 PM


Thank you for still reading my poetry.  Joyce
johnthecat
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England
5 posted 2021-04-07 12:24 PM


Another beauty, Joyce.
You never fail to make me feel transported.

Your poetry has got even better than when I first read you in the original corner pub so many years ago.

Thank you again.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb

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