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Idealized Love (an acrostic)

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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 10-27-2014 11:25 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I watch as they repeat their vows,
Darling granddaughter and her love.
Each looks into the other's eyes
As though directed from above.
Loving them both, I say a prayer.
I pray their fairy tale will last.
Zealously, jealously I beg,
Each day their love remains steadfast.
Dear Lord, for them I dare to ask.

Love that grows stronger every day,
Oh, how I wish that for these two.
Vows remembered and vows renewed,
Each partner staying strong and true.

Joyce Johnson

I wrote this the day after my youngest beloved granddaughter walked down the aisle.
© Copyright 2014 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 11-12-2014 01:39 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

This is absolutely wonderful, dear Joyce. How happy the couple must have been to receive your words of grace and beauty, born in your heart. And an acrostic no less, so very nice.

It is such a pleasure to see that you visited our little Corner Pub, I hoped you would show up and here you are. I admire you.

Love and hugs and my best wishes too.

Margherita

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2 posted 12-05-2014 09:27 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

An excellent acrostic and an excellent wish.
And, a great read.

Thanks,
Melton
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Joyce, as always, your flair is there! A lovely Acrostic. Thank you!
jjote
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4 posted 02-21-2015 02:19 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Not only is the message of the poem delightfully written, but in acrostic too.

Thanks for enlightening me on this form, so cleverly crafted, Joyce.
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5 posted 03-13-2015 04:46 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

a beautiful wish and prayer... cheers
Alison
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6 posted 03-19-2015 10:58 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I love this, Joyce - and wish them a lifetime of happiness.

Alison
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it`s beautiful Joyce, don`t we all wish those exact thoughts for our kids, and g-kids.

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8 posted 10-28-2015 08:20 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wonderful thoughts and prayer...james
 
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