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Moving on (senryu)

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Margherita
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Eternity


0 posted 07-20-2013 05:13 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Margherita









A soul's transition:

falling asleep wide awake

eyes open to light


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1 posted 07-20-2013 06:46 PM       View Profile for Lady Goodman   Email Lady Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Goodman

I hope it's like that...dissolving into light.



(And yes'm I'm just following you around now.)

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2 posted 07-21-2013 03:05 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Karen, for coming in over here in the Corner Pub where it's quiet usually.

No one really knows what's going on actually when we drift away, I love to think of this all encompassing LIGHT where we shall be ENLIGHTENED about all the mysteries that on this level of existence seemingly can't be unveiled.

Hugs, dear Karen, and have a beautiful Sunday!

... being in the NOW.


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Margherita
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3 posted 09-15-2013 02:45 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Now, dearest Karen, you KNOW!!!! Now I am in tears ... THANK YOU for your friendship and kindness, I will always remember you.

Love love love across time and space ... you know love travels faster than light and it accesses easily all dimensions.

Margherita
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4 posted 12-15-2013 05:48 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thinking of you, dear Karen, surrounded by love and light. Missing you though.

Hugs across space and time ...
Margherita
VDek
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5 posted 02-09-2014 02:09 PM       View Profile for VDek   Email VDek   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for VDek

Did you paint that as well?  Beautiful!  The words have a good rhythm for repetition in a meditation trance.

Enjoy the Love!
^-^vv~~

Margherita
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6 posted 02-09-2014 05:05 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

First of all, welcome to Pip, dear VDek, and thank you for your kind comment here. No, I am not the author of this beautiful painting, I am sorry I did not give credit to the author  because I couldn't find it.

Meditation is a wonderful means to find peace ... as well as to find answers within our depth.

Margherita
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In The Mirror


7 posted 02-13-2014 03:11 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Lovely and insightful Margerita.

The third eye is never blinded as are sometimes the first two.

...just bein' Bluesy

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8 posted 02-16-2014 04:29 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Max, for your kind comment. I agree with your statement!

Margherita
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Phaedra's Womb


9 posted 02-22-2014 05:52 PM       View Profile for Jack Napes   Email Jack Napes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jack Napes

Carefully crafted.

It's all coming back to me now. The last thing I remember being told is, "keep going until you reach the end of the circle".

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10 posted 02-24-2014 09:16 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Jack. Being a senryu pattern indeed it has to be carefully crafted in the 5-7-5 syllable pattern. I like this form, as it is a means to try to say something meaningful in very few words.

Margherita
 
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