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Margherita
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0 posted 2013-07-20 05:13 AM










A soul's transition:

falling asleep wide awake

eyes open to light



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Lady Goodman
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1 posted 2013-07-20 06:46 PM


I hope it's like that...dissolving into light.



(And yes'm I'm just following you around now.)


Margherita
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2 posted 2013-07-21 03:05 AM


Thank you, dear Karen, for coming in over here in the Corner Pub where it's quiet usually.

No one really knows what's going on actually when we drift away, I love to think of this all encompassing LIGHT where we shall be ENLIGHTENED about all the mysteries that on this level of existence seemingly can't be unveiled.

Hugs, dear Karen, and have a beautiful Sunday!

... being in the NOW.


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Margherita
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3 posted 2013-09-15 02:45 PM


Now, dearest Karen, you KNOW!!!! Now I am in tears ... THANK YOU for your friendship and kindness, I will always remember you.

Love love love across time and space ... you know love travels faster than light and it accesses easily all dimensions.

Margherita

Margherita
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4 posted 2013-12-15 05:48 AM


Thinking of you, dear Karen, surrounded by love and light. Missing you though.

Hugs across space and time ...
Margherita

VDek
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5 posted 2014-02-09 02:09 PM


Did you paint that as well?  Beautiful!  The words have a good rhythm for repetition in a meditation trance.

Enjoy the Love!
^-^vv~~

Margherita
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6 posted 2014-02-09 05:05 PM


First of all, welcome to Pip, dear VDek, and thank you for your kind comment here. No, I am not the author of this beautiful painting, I am sorry I did not give credit to the author  because I couldn't find it.

Meditation is a wonderful means to find peace ... as well as to find answers within our depth.

Margherita

Bluesy Socrateaser
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7 posted 2014-02-13 03:11 AM


Lovely and insightful Margerita.

The third eye is never blinded as are sometimes the first two.

...just bein' Bluesy

Margherita
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8 posted 2014-02-16 04:29 PM


Thank you, dear Max, for your kind comment. I agree with your statement!

Margherita

Jack Napes
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9 posted 2014-02-22 05:52 PM


Carefully crafted.

It's all coming back to me now. The last thing I remember being told is, "keep going until you reach the end of the circle".

Margherita
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10 posted 2014-02-24 09:16 AM


Thank you, dear Jack. Being a senryu pattern indeed it has to be carefully crafted in the 5-7-5 syllable pattern. I like this form, as it is a means to try to say something meaningful in very few words.

Margherita

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