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0 posted 2013-05-26 08:11 PM








Where The Sea-grass Grows

I am lonely for the ocean
And the seagull's strident cry.
For the foggy morns and evenings
That inflame the western sky.
For the salty winds and breakers
And the ocean's constant roar,
As it rushes in and crashes
On the cliffs along the shore.
I am longing for the beaches
We can walk along and see
All the strange and briny treasures
That are left for you and me.
I can see us there together,
As we were so long ago,
And the waves, our names are calling,
Where the long, sea-grasses grow!
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Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2013-05-26 09:29 PM


This is so pretty, Betty.  Are you back home?  Send me an email.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2013-05-27 05:18 AM


Beautifully poignantly penned, dear Betty Lou!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2013-05-27 02:01 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thanks for commenting. Yes, I am home and will send you an e-mail.
Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2013-05-27 02:02 PM


Margherita: Thanks. Always nice hearing from you.

Betty Lou

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5 posted 2013-06-24 07:35 AM


You make me want to be there too, Betty Lou.  I love the beach and the water - especially on a foggy, drizzly day.

Wonderfully written poem.

xoxox
Alison

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6 posted 2013-06-26 02:05 PM


Alison.  Nice to see your comments. Thanks.
I have been away from the ocean far too long and I am hoping to pay a visit before summer is over.

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2013-08-19 10:19 AM


Dear Betty Lou

As always you verse so well.  I always enjoy reading your poetry.

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2013-08-30 06:29 PM


Verbena:  Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
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9 posted 2013-09-15 05:13 AM


This is lovely!
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10 posted 2013-09-17 11:33 PM


Denise:  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2013-10-10 02:41 PM


well worded and painted

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12 posted 2013-10-10 09:35 PM


Lovely as always. Your poems are seamless.

-Juju

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13 posted 2013-12-23 07:45 PM


Daniel James Burt:  Thank you fore commenting on my poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2013-12-23 07:46 PM


Juju:  Thanks for commenting. I've been away so late in responding. Sorry.

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2014-04-02 04:00 PM


Lovely, this took me back into my longings of the sea and walking endlessly on a winter's beach, letting the wind blow me back into myself.
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16 posted 2014-04-03 07:50 PM


Extraordinary!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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17 posted 2014-04-13 08:23 PM


Very lovely poem! Excellently written.
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18 posted 2014-05-09 06:40 AM


Those of us close to waters have a deep reverence for their majesty and romantic influence. It stirs emotions within us such as those sweet reminisces found in your poetry.
    

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

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19 posted 2014-06-12 01:25 PM


Hello Betty,

This is so poignant and so beautiful.. I can find no words to describe how emotional I felt reading it. Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful thoughts.

Love, Mich

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20 posted 2014-06-15 08:53 PM


Every so often I stop by knowing I will find something beautiful.I did again today,thank you.Jo Perry

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