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Daniel James Burt
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Autumn Evening

a sittin on the back porch
watchin sun go over hill
pair o' deer stroll by the creek.
me mrs and i sharing quiet
relaxed, warm autumn eve
wiener dog guarding, vigilant.

nearly forty years in making
this evening of hometown still
who says one can't go home?
holding hand in hand again
a glance and secret smile
this God given love of mine.

one of those precious times
when everything is good
memories made of todays.
a sittin on the back porch
watchin sun go over hill
our lil world a goin to sleep.

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hmmm...seems this one wasn't liked?
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This is so absolutely serene. I love it. You are right it surely deserves a second round.

If you wish to have more readers you might want to try the Open Forum and of course the more you interact by commenting also on other writers' poems, the more attention your works will get.

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You've painted a lovely serene picture, Daniel!
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You've painted a lovely serene picture, Daniel!
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5 posted 02-19-2013 10:59 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

And I'll third what Denise said, Daniel.  

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ty...tyvm!
 
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