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r v wooo
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0 posted 2012-07-06 01:17 PM



"Twenty-four hours", they say,
as the world turns,
to give us the nite and the day.
We live!
We work!
We play!

15 degrees,
every hour,
times 24...

completes the circle...
like a revolving door,
giving rise
to a human metaphor,
the clock.

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-07-09 09:04 AM


Excellent poem. And they say "time" does not exist, but we do perceive the changes, the passing of it with our inner clock. We come and we go, as sure as the sun rises and sets again ... again and again, like a "moto perpetuo".

Margherita

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2 posted 2012-07-09 11:32 PM


Nice to find you here again RV.  I have wandered too and will try to be back more often.  Love, joyce
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2012-07-12 07:45 PM


Oh, how the years do pass. Enjoyed!

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2012-08-12 11:43 AM


ahh!! nice to read You!
Daniel James Burt
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5 posted 2012-08-21 06:45 PM


"all ya got to do is call..." lol couldn't resist after seeing yer subject line RV...sry

isn't the mechanically expressed notion of sun up, sun down perplexing? makes one think of the most ancient human ideas and ways of "telling time"  wondering if it is really just humans way of acting godlike? hmmm i sense another wabbit hole Alice...heheh

Idaho Pen
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6 posted 2012-08-23 01:43 AM


Another wonderful...have enjoyed reading your
thoughts put with pen. quickly becoming one of my favorites

r v wooo
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7 posted 2012-08-23 10:46 AM


Thanks, everyone, for the stop by and the comments. I appreciate both...
r v wooo
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8 posted 2012-08-28 09:26 AM


DJB and IP, I am intrigued by the two of you...I sense common threads in your existence.

...and DJB, you made an interesting comment that grabbed my attention..."Alice and the wabbit hole...". I'm attracted to the significance of "rabbit holes" and the imaginative worlds inside.

Lewis Carroll, Stephen King... and... the studies of Saul Rosenzweig, into the world of the idiodynamics of the creative writer, can lead one into some very strange tunnels.

Daniel James Burt
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9 posted 2012-09-05 09:46 AM


yeppers RV you are spot on...IP and i are truly connected and share thoughts, dreams and tragics.
"wabbit holes" are as attractive to me as "forever" reflections in a mirror. the concept of layers of reality is where i think i slip to for some of my most disturbing work...to bring those things into words is a gift, imo

r v wooo
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10 posted 2012-09-07 09:46 AM


Ah, have enjoyed your comments and our common interest in, both, "wabbit holes" and lasting reflections of mirror magic.

Your artistic endeavors intrigue me, D. Burt.

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