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0 posted 2012-04-29 08:06 PM



Today the day once again leaves my mind,
Clarity of the past unfolds like a long awaited paper dream,
Written were words that contain wisdom and hurt,
Fulfilling their destiny over a timeless continuum,
Beneath the surface there is more than one can encounter,
Nothing whimsical creeps upon a soul that prefers solitude,
In the absence of faith, independence is sought after,
Same thoughts reappear, but at different wavelengths of life,
Passing through the jagged reality, crimson is all that is seen,
No hint of unhindered relic that lays unchallenged,
All of it comes to an abrupt halt as the mind returns to the present,
Within every ounce of its being looking for greatness,
Pondering over every diluted thought that it encounters,
Reminiscing on what others are doing at the same time,
Fulfilling the residual cycle once more.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2012 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
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1 posted 2012-05-12 04:36 AM


This has left so many thoughts and feelings, and so many questions in my mind. I have to say, i really admire the way you wrote it. Its nice to see something that flows with out  rhyming scheme.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

Margherita
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2 posted 2012-06-01 05:07 AM


Beautiful and profound! I enjoyed your poetic ponderings.

Margherita

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