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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-04-10 09:20 AM




That Huron thunder
rumbles mighty low offshore,
and fog so thick here---
I think of desert washed light,
powdery, almost fading.

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wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
1 posted 2011-04-24 06:20 PM


I like the way you captured two different environments in a few words.  Seeing that this is so short, perhaps a different title?

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