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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2010-09-16 02:27 PM


If I was told that I could choose
A dream that would come true,
I hope I wouldn't choose a dream  
To help but one or two.
That dream must be magnificent
And a benefit to all.
The world right now is hurting.
I must make a careful call.

Would it be a cure for cancer?
A worthy dream indeed,
Or perhaps an end to world hunger
To feed a world in need?
No, I would ask that wars would end
And peace would reign supreme,
Then every corner of the world
Would be better for my dream.

If wars would end, the other dreams
Could then at last, come true,
When the energy we use to quarrel
Is saved, lives to renew

His simple message,
"Love one another.
You're all my children.
He's your brother!"


By: Joyce Johnson 9/16/10

© Copyright 2010 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2010-09-16 08:40 PM


Beautiful dream, Joyce!
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2 posted 2010-09-16 11:40 PM


This is the best dream of all Joyce! No more wars!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2010-09-17 02:10 AM


Amen!  Love should have her perfect work.  
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4 posted 2010-09-17 09:51 PM


I can only imagine what
Sy, and Marge, and others
might have answered or
responded...

I know it's resplendant with
those dreams that many of us
cannot even fathom, let alone
put into words...

but you did, and I thank you.

As does Bridget.


Bellelady1981
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5 posted 2010-09-17 11:28 PM


I thought that was perfect.

Just lil cajun me

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6 posted 2010-09-18 12:20 PM


Good point.  

Enjoyed the read.
Melton

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7 posted 2010-09-18 11:22 PM


Ah then let me fall to sleep that perchance I may partake of your wonderful Dream!!  
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8 posted 2010-10-04 02:38 PM


A wonderful poem and the choice was  perfect. Would that our prayers  could all  be heard and acted upon by the  people who cause these wars.
latearrival/jo

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9 posted 2011-03-31 12:08 PM


That was amazing, I truley loved it.
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10 posted 2011-03-31 03:21 AM


I'll join everyone else and tip my hat to a dream that I wish would come true.  I love how you write, Joyce, and I love what you write.

xoxoxo
Alison

Joyce Johnson
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11 posted 2011-03-31 07:15 PM


Thank you Alison for reading and commenting.  Love, Joyce
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12 posted 2011-10-26 10:05 AM


very very nice. I really enjoy this, very inspiring...
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