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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Across September's Sky The golden leaves are glowing Against a dome of blue. The air is filled with sighing From breezes passing through. King fishers call and flickers, While wild geese flying by Add haunting voice as winging Across September's sky. We sit until the evening chill Comes slowly creeping in, To blow its cooling, autumn breath, Upon our sun-tanned skin. We watch the clouds of sunset turn From orange to deepest red, Then rise and hurry homeward while September goes to bed! Betty Lou Hebert |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nice early Autumn description! I used to really enjoy Northern Autumn... assuming the chores were done, and I had sufficiently warm clothing for the chilly evenings. Maybe will get the chance to do so again someday. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
easy1: Thanks for commenting.I have always lived north, in Canada and the USA, so don't know what the southern autumns are like. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely perfect description of the days I am know seeing. Just beautiful! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Mysteria: Thank you for your nice comments. Always good to hear from you. We are having fall days here now too. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
This is a very nice poem . It is comforting to me to read a poem to relate to the month and coming autumn season. It is also very descriptive, and has a pleasant feeling to the things described. Great job. Regards, Novus_Os Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Novus_Os: Thank you for your kind remarks. Autumn has always been my favorite season of the year. I find a lot to enjoy about it. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a beautiful poem Betty. I love autumn too. Yesterday was a beautiful fall day. Today it is cloudy and threatening. Hopefully we will have more like yesterday before September ends. Love, Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
My most favorite time of year!  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks Joyce. We have had very little summer this year and it is definitely autumn now. I love this season though so I am not too unhappy! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: This is my favorite time of year also. Thanks. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Always a pleasure to read the way you paint a part of nature. Thanks, Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thanks for your nice comments. It's always good to hear from you. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Betty Lou The beauty of Autumn/Fall! A lovely poem describing just that! It is Spring here but feels more like Autumn. Apart from only having a couple of warm days the weather here has been quite cool. Love Verbena xo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Verbena: Thanks for reading and commenting. We are having a cool fall, after a short summer. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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