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0 posted 2010-08-15 03:10 PM








Blue Mystery

I listened to a tape today
Of sounds the humpbacks make, at play.
Who would have dreamed that giant brain
Could spawn such delicate refrain?
I close my eyes and I can see
Them, floating in blue mystery.
Just hovering above the deep
And with their song, acquaintance keep
With other whales they may have met
And nurturing their friendship yet.

Suspended over old ship's bones,
That help reverberate the tones,
They listen as they sing and soon
Detect a faint, returning tune
And even as I sit and write,
Somewhere under the sea, tonight,
The whales are singing haunting lays,
Commemorating ancient ways.

Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2010-08-15 07:20 PM


This is a wonderful tribute you've written here.

Whale speak can be quite haunting. I have even heard it used in (somewhat arcane) popular music to good effect.

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2 posted 2010-08-15 07:28 PM


easy 1:  Thank you! I agree with what you say. There is something so compelling about the sounds the whales make. I listen to cd's of them often and feel as though there is something momentous they are saying! If we only knew!

Betty Lou

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3 posted 2010-08-15 11:02 PM


There is a sense here, something I can't quite place, of childlike wonder. I wish people shared it more often, as you did here.

Best regards,


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4 posted 2010-08-16 03:38 PM


Novus os:  Thanks for your comments. I cana't quite explain how the sounds the whales make, cause me to feel.

Betty Lou

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5 posted 2010-09-26 07:22 AM


Dear Betty Lou

'Whale Song'; an oceans echo and mystery of the deep!

A whale of a poem!  Loved it!

Love Verbena xo


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6 posted 2010-09-26 07:23 AM


Dear Betty Lou

'Whale Song'; an oceans echo and mystery of the deep!

A whale of a poem!  Loved it!

Love Verbena xo


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7 posted 2010-09-26 07:23 AM


Dear Betty Lou

'Whale Song'; an oceans echo and mystery of the deep!

A whale of a poem!  Loved it!

Love Verbena xo

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8 posted 2010-09-26 07:23 AM


Dear Betty Lou

'Whale Song'; an oceans echo and mystery of the deep!

A whale of a poem!  Loved it!

Love Verbena xo


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9 posted 2010-09-26 07:24 AM


Dear Betty Lou

'Whale Song'; an oceans echo and mystery of the deep!

A whale of a poem!  Loved it!

Love Verbena xo


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10 posted 2010-09-26 06:30 PM


Thank you Verbena for your comments!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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