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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2010-07-19 09:15 PM



Come on Adam, just for me,
Please try a little bite.
A little taste wil tell you
If the snake and I are right.

But now you say God's angry
And He won't let us stay?
He's repossessing Eden
And He's sending us away?

Well you know it's your fault Adam,
You should have fenced that tree.
If you hadn't been so lazy
We'd be living fair and free.

I'm telling you right now Adam,
I'm not going anywhere
Until you buy me some new clthes.
I have not a thing to wear.

Joyce Johnson

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1 posted 2010-07-20 04:37 AM


Excellent and humorous! I wonder what they did wear back then, grass skirts?
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2 posted 2010-07-20 10:48 AM


Awww, Joyce. What a way to start my day.  Thank you.  I love this and now ... well, I have to go shopping!

xoxoxoxo
Alison

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3 posted 2010-07-22 11:39 PM


Passions is rejecting me hope this goes through. Joyce
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4 posted 2010-07-22 11:40 PM


Thanks Easy1 and Alison.  I am glad you liked my little stab at humor.  Love, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-24-2010 04:42 PM).]

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5 posted 2010-07-22 11:57 PM


I always love your stabs at humor.

xoxoxo
A

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6 posted 2010-07-23 04:06 PM


Hi Joyce:

This is really cute and clever!

love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2010-07-24 04:43 PM


hank you Betty.  i am so happy to have my computer back it makes me giddy.  Love, Joyce
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