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deleeme
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0 posted 2010-04-19 01:04 PM



The old Status Quo--might be nice to know
But I shun it as my guide
I seek to excel, and not just do well
Such as would give to me good stride.

I thirst to expand, get the upper hand
Not as a power play
But in use to grow, use what I know
To put excellence on display.

But I do have need, to gather seed
To be inspired by others good souls
Some to lead the way, some to help me stay
On course that triumph, I'd know.

Oh what good we do- as we stay true
To our quest on this sphere
In our give and take, so much is at stake
Mutual blessings, we should hold dear!

We can all aspire, and can each inspire
To give and take as we can
Then we all are blest, as we do our best--
For so is the Master Plan!


I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

© Copyright 2010 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2010-04-19 10:14 PM


Your Master Plan sounds good to me.  This is an inspiring poem  Good to hear from you and thank you for your comments on my Paul Bunyan poem.  Love, Joyce
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2010-12-13 03:27 PM


A rich tapestry sets this table, colors vivid; flavors sharp~ and a fullness of faith that remains nourishing long after the savoring of thoughtful words and works.
Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-12-13 07:12 PM


I like the message but also the way that you structured this poem.
Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2010-12-27 07:21 PM


Oh my dear David.  I have just heard of your death from your beloved June.  I am so sad.  Love to you in Heaven. Joyce
Lorraine Deane
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since 2011-01-29
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5 posted 2011-01-29 01:41 AM


Absoluely beautiful, nothing more need I say.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2011-01-29 05:34 AM


You always knew the right words to say~~

"But I do have need, to gather seed
To be inspired by others good souls
Some to lead the way, some to help me stay"

Always,
M

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