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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2010-03-23 09:57 PM





the pristine sparkling drops
fall from the laughing sky
the fresh breath of spring
carries these gems
to the waiting beds
to wake up springs children

they stretch
as they poke through
the soil blanket
which had protected them
from winters wrath

they sip the heaven sent elixir
and wash sleep from their eyes
throwing about the colors
of their Easter bright garments
to celebrate their resurrection
praising their maker


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2010-03-26 10:54 AM


This is indeed a lovely spring poem, David
Dennis L. White
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2 posted 2010-03-26 06:46 PM


Joyce, David is my Twin brother, I am Dennis :^)

Thanks for the comment.

Denise
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3 posted 2010-04-04 05:09 AM


This is beautiful, Dennis!
deleeme
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4 posted 2010-04-19 01:00 PM


But David ,too (your twin Brother) also thinks that you did a fantastic job on this one. Though I can't take any credit for this one-- it's good enough, that I'd like to!

Thanks for sharing this one here!

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2010-04-27 01:03 AM


Sorry Dennis.  I knew that.  Just a slip.Do you look alike? It's still a great poem.  Joyce
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