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PurplePenButterfly
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0 posted 2009-11-01 02:22 PM



My oh my
Just imagine this
If leaves had mouths
What kind of stories they would hear
Hit and miss

Why one day if I went by a tree
Out of blue
It winked at me

And then at once they came to life
Recounted the gossip about the man and wife

Holy cow - what goes on?!
Is this for real ?!
What's next- they sing a song

Of course it has to be all in my imagination
But if it were true
What a sensation

If only they could
And one day would
Wouldn't we all be in a shock
When the day had came
This idea not lame
If leaves could tallk...

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Alison
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1 posted 2009-11-01 02:56 PM


You made me smile and that's a very special thing to me.  Thank you.

Alison

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2009-11-01 05:09 PM


If leaves and trees and weeds could talk.  
They'd guide us on our daily walk.
They'd tell us where the violets grow,
And many things we'd like to know.

Your poem is inspiring.  Joyce

Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
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3 posted 2009-12-12 06:07 PM


hehehe this made me laugh



loved it.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

QuietAstronomer
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since 2009-12-13
Posts 18
North Carolina, USA
4 posted 2009-12-13 10:22 PM


Very excellent write.
The concept is truly intriguing.
And refreshing.
Thank you.
QA

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2009-12-26 08:09 PM


A lovely 'What if...' poem!  What tales the silent witness's could tell is left to the imagination, a fun thng to ponder, thanks for sharing.  

Dennis

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6 posted 2010-01-15 07:43 AM


This is really a cute poem!
Barb

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