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midnightblues
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0 posted 2009-08-17 12:29 PM


Some days I think of you and I smile
When I see honey-stars, or strawberry oat porridge, or canned corn
Or think of your wrinkly grin, bright as a child's; the list goes on


Some days I think of you and I tear up, because for a split second I would forget that you're not around anymore
The aftermath is always bittersweet, but I've learnt to live with it


I know that I am not good enough, but in your eyes I was the sweetest prettiest most thoughtful girl in the world
You were always generous with your smiles and made me feel so important, so special, so loved
And that is enough for me, even now

You had a way with me, grandma, like no one else can do
Wish you were here with me now

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I am feeling a little blue, thinking of you..

MiCheLLe


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

© Copyright 2009 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2009-08-18 08:33 PM


MiCheLle:

A sweet, nostalgic poem.  Reminds me of my own grandmother who was Irish to the core and full of fanciful ideas.  I enjoyed her so much, so I know a little of what you are feeling.

Love
Betty lou

Betty Lou Hebert

dr tung
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2 posted 2011-10-23 10:34 AM


Hi I found this forum again after so many years...

nice write... i miss my granny so much too since she left in 2003

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2011-12-31 01:33 AM


Ah, touched a cord here my friend. Very nicely done.

j.

mona88
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since 2011-11-24
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4 posted 2012-01-12 02:47 AM


Nice poem! I really appreciate it.


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Denise
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5 posted 2012-01-22 06:56 PM


Very touching, midnightblues.
Abbeon
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6 posted 2012-03-25 08:25 PM


Grandmothers always have a special place in your heart, where they make you smile. Thank you for sharing your memories, i loved your piece.

Abbeon

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