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Hope Fleeting Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52Smalltown, Somewhere |
Drowning... In a sea of debt Holding on by my fingertips... And hoping..praying... That somehow this to will pass. Drowning... In an ache of agony Just wishing you were here to hold... And hoping...praying... That you will make it home. Drowning... In waves of loneliness Knowing there are people around.. And hoping...praying... But no one hears my cries. Drowning... In this lost land called life Knowing that I live without truly living... And hoping..praying... But I grow tired, and just want to sleep. ~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!!!!!  The only thing wrong with this is tht I didn't write it... I think I'll go and cry now. Check your e-mail for a special greeting. But this one goes to eleven... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome - and what a poignant first post. Unfortunately this poem could apply to far too many these days, but I have faith better days are coming for all. Carpe' Diem, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Truly pertinent to the day. Joyce |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Nicole, what an impressive and in the same time sad first post (under the relatively new login name)! Very well rendered anxiety! May hope give you strength to cope and to overcome whatever difficulties. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I feel the same way sometimes! Wonderful writing! Welcome to PIP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Life can be just that, m'dear without the roller coaster of recent circumstances. Well done, and welcome to Passions! We'll all look forward to more of your passionate writing! |
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skymist2 Junior Member
since 2009-04-14
Posts 26Florida |
I say you've found your feet...a poem many can identify with in this day and time. Thanks for sharing. Sky |
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SeraphimBroken Member
since 2009-03-09
Posts 74USA |
I know this "gasping" for life all too well. I am just waiting to breathe again. Great read! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A lot of emotion here ... a long and lonely path, though sometimes shared by others, to and from the same direction  well written |
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