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Jane Eyre
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since 2009-01-09
Posts 9
Canada

0 posted 2009-01-24 02:36 AM


You have captivated me,
I don’t know how,
I don’t know why,
All I know is that you have
When I talk to you,
I come alive,
In a way that I only have with my close friends
When I’m with you,
I come alive,
I don’t feel pressed for a topic of conversation,
It all just rolls so easily
My heart aches at the thought
That I can’t be with you,
Oh heaven help me,
And you,
Heal the wounds that were created long ago,
But are still fresh,
And let you know,
Just how much,
I think that I’m falling for you



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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2009-01-31 02:16 PM


Lots of expression here.  Keep Writing.  Joyce
Jane Eyre
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since 2009-01-09
Posts 9
Canada
2 posted 2009-01-31 06:39 PM


Oh thank you Joyce!
Hope Fleeting
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since 2009-02-23
Posts 52
Smalltown, Somewhere
3 posted 2009-02-23 03:27 AM


It's always hard to start a new relationship when remembering the hurts of old ones.  Good expressions of feelings in this.  Keep them coming

~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~

I know when to bow my head in defeat and move on...

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