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Jane Eyre
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since 2009-01-09
Posts 9
Canada

0 posted 2009-01-13 12:25 PM



Captivated
You have your camera in hand,
Capturing the event as it unfolds before you,
You are the artist and it is your canvas, your camera your brush
Click, you take a picture of a group of people talking,
Capturing the capturing the conversation,
With all the joy, happiness, and laughter that it contains
Click click, you capture the kids chasing each other around the room,
Carefully weaving through the crowd of people,
Laughing and smiling
You are in invisible, observing the world from the outside in
Suddenly you spy her,
Smiling, laughing, chatting,
Her smile makes the world around her light up,
Her laughter,
Casting a spell over you,
A spell that you surrender completely to
You walk closer to her, to capture her forever,
Before she’s gone
You raise the camera to your face,
Click,
Again,
Click,
You move closer,
Greedy for a better look click,
Suddenly she spies you,
You cure her peripheral vision,
She blushes,
You smile and blush in return,
Click
A picture of the face that has captivated you



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1 posted 2009-01-13 02:24 AM


A very nice vision of someone with an "eye" for beauty.  Again, welcome to the site, I know you will enjoy it here.
Jane Eyre
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since 2009-01-09
Posts 9
Canada
2 posted 2009-01-24 02:35 AM


Oh thank you!
Hope Fleeting
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since 2009-02-23
Posts 52
Smalltown, Somewhere
3 posted 2009-02-25 11:52 AM


A great insight into how some people are more captivating then others, especially when viewed through the lens of a camara.

~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~

I know when to bow my head in defeat and move on...

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