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IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2008-09-17 07:10 PM


I can almost look
down the road and see you
dearest
I can't see or
feel or
think
being apart-whatever has happened
whatever will happen-
its like begging mercy in the midst of a storm
its like growing old

its late
all the windows are open
the air outside is soft
as spring
yet somehow
much younger
much more frail
than spring
I've often wondered why we think of
spring as a young woman
why that illusion dances and sings
through three months
through the world's preposterous barrenness
spring is a ragged old plough horse
ribs showing starkly,
or a pile of refuse in an empty field
parched by the sun and
the rain to an ominous cleanliness

I don't believe anyone alive
can see themselves as an
impermanent institution
a luxury, an unnecessary evil
so very few
accentuate the futility of life
and feel that futility in themselves
perhaps they think in denouncing ruin
in proclaiming the evil of living
they somehow salvage their own worth
they don't.

still, I can see you
there's blue haze about the trees
that you'll be passing
too beautiful to be
predominant
no
the fallow squares of earth will be more frequent
alongside the track like dirty coarse brown sheets
drying in the sun,
very much alive
mechanical
and abominable

So you see
now that you're gone I've
written a letter
as empty as the hours
and in this contempt
or despair
there must be proof of something
higher
rarefied and
out of season

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1 posted 2008-09-21 11:55 PM


What an absolutely beautiful picture you painted with your words, which were hardly empty.
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