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longte
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since 2005-04-06
Posts 199
Australia

0 posted 2008-06-29 05:21 AM


Age

Winters age grows bitter
as snow flakes when they land
no longer is there beauty
just ice across the land
but in your stupidity
how could you understand

For winters age is lustfull
ice burning with desire
Deaths minions grow closer
drag you to the mire
as the cold encompasses
with its freezing fire

Fools will look for beauty
in the ice and snow
winters age is lonely nights
this you should well know
don't cry for me in tears of ice
as your future shows


Live It

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midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2008-07-09 11:06 AM


bleak.. smart moves!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Danny Cobb
Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74

2 posted 2008-07-11 07:43 PM


i would say a mst chilling scenario of the pits of getting old and unloved.

An interesting write--
Write on!

   Danny

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