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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2008-06-27 09:06 AM



Who can say with certainty
that this sweet love will last
that it won’t end in shambles
a dark figment of our past

these days with you are precious
the best days of my life
filled with joyful promise
devoid of common strife

yet fate is a complex creature
deception is his style
he lulls you into peaceful bliss
and then reveals his guile

are we two impregnable
a fortress against the tide
or are we quite susceptible
to the trials that we must ride

who can say with certainty
I’m not one to boldly bluff
I can but try my best in this
and pray it is enough

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Joyce Johnson
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Posts 9912
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1 posted 2008-06-27 10:17 AM


Very nice.  Of course it can last and will dear Peg.  Just keep writing your endearing poetry.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2008-07-09 11:01 AM


Feels like first love..

MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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