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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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0 posted 2008-05-25 08:42 PM





Sailor you are a memory of my mis forgotten past.  Who created a wound
unhealing, a sore which would always last. An injury that is incurable  inserted upon a dream, just barely endurable enough that I could scream.  A pain placed so deep within my soul that it penetrates my heart like the treachery of a quick drawn sword.
Reflecting upon our first meeting how your face oh so shinned with the strength of your character but by love I was blind.  You deceived me completely by the smile upon your face so I became the victim of your ultimate chase.  As I looked deep inside your starry blue eyes I saw a foundation that was built upon lies.  You stood there and told me the dreams of your youth with words softly spoken a token of truth.  For love and compassion I trusted your speech hoping in some way it was intended to teach.  When your pursuit was then over I you had my love oh so true, the days were then numbered that I would be with you.
And to those fruitful visions,   I devoted 5 years of my life.  Despite the distance between us it was only a matter of time .  You wrote of your contentment you had a full almost complete life you had found the piece you   were missing the empty space in your life and when you did you said She was a beautiful spirit filled wife.  So now your just a memory an antiquity of my past who created a wound unhealing a sore which would always last.  Yes sometimes it takes hurt in life sometimes growth takes pain so we can climb the aches of time and not remain the same.


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2008-05-26 10:18 AM


Dear Kimberly,

The pain reflected through this is so raw, so real.. I am recovering from a past relationship torn apart by betrayal, and I understand what you are trying to express here..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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