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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
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Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-05-21 11:18 AM


What sin is?


What my child?
What is sin?
My child Sin is your question?
What is sin?
Something forbitten by the gods,
What is my Sin?
Thats something, my child, you must find out yourself.

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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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1 posted 2008-05-21 12:49 PM


Great write, very thought provoking.

Hugs kimberly


midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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2 posted 2008-05-23 10:02 AM


Agree, simple yet straight to the point.
Post more!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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3 posted 2008-09-24 02:11 PM


the way this is written is beautiful and unique. i wish to read more poems this simple yet meaningful
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